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Offline daasianz

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rate plz?
« on: June 09, 2010, 03:45:49 PM »
constructive criticism plz

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Re: rate plz?
« Reply #1 on: June 11, 2010, 08:48:13 AM »
i like the subject and the colors and overall design.  i think you could move the render to the right a slight bit.  i'm not a fan of the the text.

i would like to see a tut of how this was made.


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Re: rate plz?
« Reply #2 on: June 11, 2010, 11:50:14 AM »
oh... i used a tut to make this.... this was my 3rd try at it.... im still a noobie that these things. and yea other people have commented that they didnt like the text

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Re: rate plz?
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2010, 12:26:50 PM »
Text can be very tricky. I think with a small tweak you could increase the depth on this piece and really push the focal to the render.

Let me know if you are interested in this idea.

Also, you will find that we do not do ratings here. I know this may seem odd, but allow me to explain a wee bit. Any rating system we would employ here, or on any other site, would not affect another nor would it be overly recognized in the graphics community as a whole. Each site that does ratings do so on a local level to their site. That said, we strive to improve the artist and the art, that way it really doesn't matter what someone else thinks your work is rated. I hope that makes some sense.
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Re: rate plz?
« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2010, 08:49:25 AM »
I'd have to agree with istarlome and Darth. I'm not a fan of the text and I find my focus is drawn just to the left of the render.

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Re: rate plz?
« Reply #5 on: June 29, 2010, 07:46:27 PM »
Its good,overall i would rate it a 8/10,its amazing for your first handful of tries,just try to keep the render centered a little more,im not a fan of the text much,but i love the color scheme and the overall idea and theme,keep up your good work!

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